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Zen Peddler

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beautiful

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Very very nice! I do a bit of writing and recording every now and then myself. Its always nice to listen to other peoples work, especially when they have obviously put a lot of effort into polishing it! What did you use to create this?

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I really like the others too - do you do the vocals on "Brave"? What about the guitars on "Fluffy Jet"?

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very cool. Probably my preferred song of the ones of yours i have heard

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i like it. i thought the drums stuck out a bit too much but i still liked it.

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Thanks for listening folks! Yeah i did the guitar, but the vocals are by a friend. He is pretty good although he smokes WAY too much weed and that hampers his motivation.

THnaks guys!

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man, that's pretty cool.

the cymbals at 1.07 and 2.12 I would temper slightly, sounded a bit too tinny or something. I would have liked to hear more of a motif building from the few "bird sounds" that emerge at around 3.30.

maybe a bit more bass on the drums at 2.02.

Last note sounds off somehow, like it should end on an extra note a semitone lower.

But pretty good! I wish I could write stuff like this...must get started on the hobby!

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