hutch Posted August 13, 2010 A star in my hand Water pipe to kiss my lips Pray belladonna Mushroom LSD What the fuck reality Coming over me Eyeballs looking good Please tell me what you can see A puppet master Is the sun up yet.... I'm just going to keep going til I win something Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 13, 2010 Illusions of time Lifting a grey colored veil Oh joyous wonder To try and dissect What is above and beyond Do you think your god A fire within Search for a soul you can trust Knowledge before dust This time of my life The only thing that I'm sure Confusion exists Life is so potent A story not to be missed Thank you and good night...... Bloody addictive Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 13, 2010 (edited) Now you have created a monster..... I wonder for whom Is the reaper next to see Over my shoulder A peak or a trough Overdose in my minds eye Oops wasn't that close An onslaught at me I duck cover run and hide More power to you A difference I make Now I learnt to love me Like giving it back I'm holding it in Scared to let it all go Here quick take billy Edited August 14, 2010 by hutch Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Thelema Posted August 13, 2010 1) when my lightbulb blew i replaced it with a new lightbulb to see with 2) time assaulted me it's fungal tendrils growing sowing fractal time 3) Want a cup of tea? Please go and get it yourself I'm too tired right now Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 13, 2010 Forgive me brother I need to haiku like spam 2 tix up for grabs You like what you read Don't bother sending me cash Herbs and SPICE is nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 13, 2010 (edited) Am I seeing sound Deep vibrations from within Awareness fill me Deep dark and shimmer I reflect within my soul Don't severe my chord Holding back the tide Not an easy thing to do Mescaline my god My magic bucket Just missed out on a rainbow Rusting to it's core Edit - spelling....... I'm outa control Edited August 13, 2010 by hutch Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rahli Posted August 13, 2010 Man is on fire! The hidden switch in his brain, a pyre of pain! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vual Posted August 13, 2010 (edited) Judge creativity?...sure. lol Who defines a syllable, wordcalc.com to cheat? A free for all, Five, Most lads have no more then four, You need five / seven. fuck off troll you cunt! sexual gratification.. Must you put others down? Edited August 13, 2010 by vual Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dude Posted August 14, 2010 real awesome stuff guys poetry reflects the soul hallway of mirrors you write something down it seems it's all about me 'course it always was I dream of myself trying to convince myself that I'm someone else i can see clearly heavy rain, scum washed away fresh new scenery I'm just here to spam these worms are everywhere cuz i opened the can not got much today forgot what i wanna say I'll try anyway expression in jest this poem here is the best sarcastically yes food for thought famine with poison we are spoon fed now fresh fruit tastes yuck hypnotised masses tell me prison is cozy it's scary outside poisonous gasses cover us with a blanket thanks for the chemtrails slumber will come soon don't you dare ever wakeup sleep little baby the truth is out there and it's real fucking scary better stay inside wait for the punchline of the longest joke ever in all history when the curtains close the daemon joker exposed known is mystery Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Deb-One-Amine Posted August 14, 2010 im the graph paper kid. On that real cool old school shit.. with mad math skills bitch! Drill This Hard And Fast Need time Without my toxic past still all need some class Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ThunderIdeal Posted August 14, 2010 el duderino you're one switched on cunt arncha? blow my mind always 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Deb-One-Amine Posted August 14, 2010 (edited) A Physical Embrace, (5) Mankind always fast paced, (7) Damned n Withered... (5) A Weed Or Some Speed, (5) We All Seem To Agree And DisAgree, (7) Its a Need like we bleed... (5) Edited August 16, 2010 by The Deb-One-Amine Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dr dognutz Posted August 14, 2010 balls, balls here they are, choke on them ... YOU CAN VOTE? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 14, 2010 (edited) Total surrender Embracing the ebb and flow Stand up to your fear You came to me friend I will hold you tight tonight Ribbed for your pleasure Cockadoodledoo The first golden ray of sun Fucken hang over Edited August 14, 2010 by hutch Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 14, 2010 This bloke called The Dude My ticket he wants to get Skilled word warrior But I'll take you on As I sharpen up my pen My word against yours Two thousand and ten A ticket I want to get Dictionary brain But what of the rest Only three prizes in all The challenge is on I just realized "dictionary brain" sounds insulting Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Deb-One-Amine Posted August 15, 2010 (edited) As The Worlds Start Spinning, (5) Im Starting Strangely Slipping, (7) Now i Feel Like God... (5) Its All Sucking In, (5) Upon Its Self Once Again, (7) This Cant Really Be The Worlds End.(5) But Ive Seen The Worlds End, (5) Apon mans Endless Depend, (7) For Richs And Bitches.. (5) Descendant For Ripe, (5) Sticky Icky Hidden Down A well (7) Thats How I Hide Me Smell, (5) Stoned Like A Fire, (5) A Breathe Of Transcending Spire, (7) Hot Swap Dimensions... (5) Ill Leave You Hanging Dry, (5) While I Tend To My Garden In The Sky, (7) And Wait For Your Mums Pie.. (5) Edit: Double checking And Adding Syllable numbers Edited August 16, 2010 by The Deb-One-Amine Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Deb-One-Amine Posted August 15, 2010 Hutch man babys dont smoke When I see It I wanna Toke surprised he Dont choke Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 15, 2010 (edited) The deb one amine Count syllables take your time A prize you wont get Go back through your work Remember five seven five Step up to the line Baby is faggin You can hear it in my chest Best learn my lesson Edit...One too many Edited August 16, 2010 by hutch Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dude Posted August 16, 2010 (edited) teehee, you done well to educate through poems format of haiku you done perfectly teaching through your examples great were the first two then somehow you fell out of the haiku poem grove first line had too much [edit] crossed out then cuz-a syllable amount praise be to edit Edited August 16, 2010 by The Dude Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amazonian Posted August 16, 2010 (edited) Hey dude,you did too, use too many syllables. Or did you mean to? We all lost the plot. There is a ticket to win, Try to concerntrate. Searching, focusing, Oh, there you are ,young mushroom. bending, pick, bag it. Edited August 16, 2010 by Amazonian Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 16, 2010 (edited) I done that I did What I did though you did too Six six five edit You are the master Of this there can be no doubt I'm a pretender Some how you fell out To keep it as a haiku Do away with "then" Edit spelling Edited August 16, 2010 by hutch Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Deb-One-Amine Posted August 16, 2010 chew caterpillars just to spit out a butterfly thats the circle of life Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amazonian Posted August 16, 2010 With love and respect, consume Psilocybe fungi. Become all knowing. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dude Posted August 16, 2010 (edited) I's being a smartarse with the last poem i wrote example of don't now I'll keep within this graceful simple format with its restrictions The Deb-One-Amine not being picky but the last two lines, one too much If i could suggest a couple changes to it easy to fix it chew caterpillars just to spit out a butterfly thats the circle of life Edited August 16, 2010 by The Dude Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dude Posted August 16, 2010 (edited) I won one last year do this to up my post count don't care 'bout ticket Generous offer I was fucking stoked last year winning stuff is fun in it to win it? nah man, doin' it for fun easy flow in it Edited August 16, 2010 by The Dude Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
