Sallubrious Posted January 13, 2016 (edited) Ethereal Drifting I was drifting through the etherin a dream I had last nightWhen fractal pixelationsbegan to overwhelm my sightThen the light grew strongerMy head began to spinand that was then a wormholeopened up and sucked me inI shifted gear to hyperspaceWas I dead, was I aliveThis journey to another placeI'm sure I will surviveThen I felt the universe had gifted me the keysto unlock all it's secretsI could do it as I pleaseI opened doors, I read the signsI wallowed in the lightthis gift that I'd been givenby the beings of the lightBut then a thump awoke meI was back home in my bedt'was just a dream that I had seenIt was all inside my headI know it all sounds clichéWhile awake it seems not rightmy twisted dream perspectivethis beautiful delightbut words don't do it justicecould it be where dejavu comes froman alternate dimensionI really just don't knowBut something that I know for surewith no shadow of a doubtIf I can get just one more chanceI know that I will goI'll be drifting through the etherwith these beings that I know. Edited January 13, 2016 by Sallubrious 19 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ThunderIdeal Posted January 13, 2016 :D Im not gonna search for an appropriate adjective. You can probably guess im pants-down impressed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ThunderIdeal Posted January 13, 2016 :D Im not gonna search for an appropriate adjective. You can probably guess im pants-down impressed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sallubrious Posted January 13, 2016 I don't know where it came from TI, I got the phrase "fractal pixelations" in my head this arvo, so I just ran with it and the rest flowed out in about 5 minutes. Normally when I get something catchy in head I just keep playing it over and over and eventually end up morphing it into something else and it ends up totally meaningless ie. Fractal pixelations pixelled fractalations pixelated fractions fractalated pixens etc etc So I wrote that as a form of therapy before I descended into that cycle. I waste way too many brain cycles on meaningless bullshit. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ThunderIdeal Posted January 13, 2016 My fave: but words don't do it justice could it be where dejavu comes from an alternate dimension I really just don't know Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sallubrious Posted January 13, 2016 Yeah, it was a simple Jack and Jill style nursery rhyme up to that point so, so I broke the the cadence with a quasi epistemological postulation to try and add a bit of breadth. Honestly though, I was just distracted by an all in brawl my kids were engaged in over the playstation and I couldn't think of anything that rhymed, so I just winged it. Tennyson talented I be not. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Martyh64 Posted March 21, 2017 Title really grabbed me, synch much, nice work man Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Horus Posted March 22, 2017 You know your now destined to recite that around the next Campfire. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
immanuel Posted April 4, 2017 (edited) dear me, a note to self. trying a nueroleptic with everyday breakfast. Edited November 6, 2017 by manu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites