Yet another one.

[Guest Mesqualero]

Well I am bored so i am posting another poem.

Well they are actually song lyrics but yeah...

Choose your enemies

Somehow you're the one

Bright eyed devil's son

From lands afar

Don't be afraid

I'm waiting to be saved

Come with me, I'll be saved

When i come to light the way

All these worlds will dissipate

Time to see, I'll receive

maybe one day far away

i'll finally win the game

Tragic tales of old

someone's heart was sold

to make you understand the truth

but you still need the proof.

Taken by the sea

what you saw was me

that night you had your wicked way

and now you are my slave.

Somehow you're the Sun

Bright eyed Devils love

Don't shed a tear for those who wait

Just weep for your mistakes.

bah it sux i know but what the hell as i said i was bored.

[Guest MIHKAL]

sux be fucked. to me it speaks of powerful guitar backing, driving drums and a capable vocalist. you may have written it in a different mindset but it almost lends itself to thrash metal. just my personal view and i'm not offended if u don't share it.

[Guest Mesqualero]

Originally posted by MIHKAL:

sux be fucked. B]

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Originally i wrote it for acoustic guitar it was pretty gentle yet moody....

Now I don't like the music i wrote for it. I always end up hating the guitar pieces i write cos i'm not good enough on guitar to do justice to my voice... but yeah thanks for replying

[anubian lights]

Yeah its good lyrics Mesqualero!

But MIHKAL, I think it'd work better as a power ballad, hey man all metal bands have a sensitive reflective side.

[Guest Mesqualero]

Thanks anubian lights... I AM a bit of a crooner