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A haiku is a short poem where the first line consists of five syllables, the second having seven and the third having five again.

The winner gets one of the psycho0 bridgesii that passive sent me, I would rather grow one and get the other out into someone elses garden :)

I will decide on the best one next Sunday at around midnight. If you like someones haiku you can 'vote' for it, and if one gets lots of votes or whatever I'll pick that one.

Here is one to kick it off:

Write your own Haiku

You will like it very much

Win an awesome prize.

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Inside she glows bright

Lighting up this faded life

Now all is clear

Edited by naja naja

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I'll try making reference to my current situation:

Yum! Chilli pizza

Inevitable arse burn

Very slow learner :slap:

Edit: I cant count!

Edited by Bongchitis

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Ahh I love the ocean on a bright hot day

Sunshine ripples glow

below the blue deep, roll,

calm caressing feet

Edited by tepa

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I have raven called depression.

Terrible weight,

Emotions do cloud,

Brilliant light.

The deepest depths,

Vast ocean of nothing,

God weeping.

A fuck it you know, sometimes i'm happy...

Glorious rapture!

The lotus ever-blooming!

None of it matters! (hahahahahahaha!!)

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heres one for the mesa

mesa so divine

cactus tobacco we shine

raise cleanse turn around

hope htat is right i never written one before LOL

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I love Haikus, write them everywhere to make people think

Here's one I wrote on my mate's fridge when he was staying at a share house

Big, white food cooler

Fill me up with beer and snacks

Who drank all the milk?

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^LMAO.

that is one vote for Oxydiser :lol:

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Here's one about an encounter with clamydia I had once:

Drunk fuck dirty slut

Burning piss and itchy dick

Swab my urethra

:puke:

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Green Cacti with spikes

Oh how have you helped my life

put away the knife

Edited by cisumevil

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Hmm Similar to mine kenny :)

Dirty ex girlfriend

Passed her Virus onto me

She is gonna pay

This is fun :blush:

Edited by DreamingNagual

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I just had a shit day at work,

My boss is a prick

Why does he treat me like shit?

Give me my money!

:lol: I feel better already!

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Reality fades

For a moment all is fine

but life continues

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and another 'difficult' boss motivated Haiku:

Square peg, round hole.....fit?

knowledge is power........weakling

Waving goodbye soon

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Seems I already have the lageniformis on offer, so leave me out of this one. One more haiku for the thread though, to vent my grievances on the domestic front...

Nebulous fighting

Never wrong, never sorry

This shit wears me down

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I wish I had skill

To write a decent haiku

And win a cactus :lol:

wow - im pretty bad at this :blink:

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+1 for oxydiser

and a haiku in honour of the most generous prize

psycho0 bridgesii

flourish, grow big, fat, strong

sow acceptance, love

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and some self pity over my impending oldness

the joys of youth

soon to be but memories

thirty tomorrow

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and some self pity over my impending oldness

the joys of youth

soon to be but memories

thirty tomorrow

Happy B'day for tomorrow? :lol:

T'was mine just yesterday :P

All the best Tobias!

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Sacrament vapour

Fractal shrapnel tears apart

Oh what have I done!?!

Edited by Dirty Old Man

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