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Hungry for new experiences,human mind dives readily almost every opportunity presented ahead..
Perceiving reality,experiencing energies through the medium of the body,thinking and feeling vary,for senses and minds are conditioned in a context..
Gesture and intonation help to converse and writing requires more for particular outcome ..
Describing multitude of realities happening in the same space simultaneously,the several meanings single word carry present a fascinating opportunity..
Playing with words developed this five line structure - expressing multitude of life,associating a being ..
Avoiding to specify meaning in a sentence,the opposite effect of equally valid multiple interpretations is in prospect..

Line interactions :

1
1+2
1+2+3
1+2+3+5
2
2+3
2+3+5
3
3+5
5

- first line(1)ends with a dash and reads separately;also reads connected with the second line;or connected with the second and the third line only..as well with the whole structure..
- second line(2)reads separately;also reads connected with the third line only;or connected with the third and the fifth line only..as well as with the whole structure..
- third line(3)begins with two dots and reads separately;also reads connected with the fifth line only.. as well with the whole structure..
- fourth line(4)is the longest one - a pause of twenty six empty symbol spaces..
- fifth line(5)ends with exclamation point and reads separately;also reads connected with the whole structure..


The achieved symmetry conduces multiple separate reading events,happening simultaneously..
If the conscious mind is confused with the content,а subliminal choice is made for settlement,dependent on one's inclination to perceive certain traits in one's reality,while patterns and tendencies of thinking are highlighted..
Communicating simultaneous multiple realities avoids the tendency to choose a reality and engage with its traits..
The subliminal mind impressed by certain word energies and the associated feelings,assists the consciousness while composing the structure..
Synchronicities,memories,imagination and fantasy all participate..
Sexual element and a humorous aspect are weaved into..
Possibility to look into the unpleasant is presented as well..
Resembling people - entities of mind state,unity of contraries..both ugly and beautiful,profane and inspired .. when brought together,simultaneous story lines appear,as in life..
An effect of enhanced realization - reality interaction within the world dynamics.. creator and creation karmic voyage into the now fun play..

 

 

 

 

gallivant -
fervor
.. canoodle

summons !

 

 

 

 

creator -
sun
.. gaze

my pretties !




sweet -
place
.. the only one

my own !

 

 

 

 

temporal -
number
.. address

temple !

 

 

 

 

CC -
Catch
.. 22

happy returns !

 

 


 

right -
handle
.. nothing

left !

 

 

 

 

distant -
as a soul
.. mate

contract !

 

 

 

 

uni -
corn
.. butter flies

rain bow !




how -
dare
.. I

tutti frutti !



 

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corner poet trance -
end
.. forms

precluded !

 

 

 

 

actual -
badly
.. Whatson

notes !

Edited by mysubtleascention

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gallivant -
fervor
.. canoodle

summons !




creator -
sun
.. gaze

my pretties !




sweet -
place
.. the only one

my own !




temporal -
number
.. address

temples !




CC -
Catch
.. 22

happy returns !

 

 

 

 

corner poet trance -
end
.. forms

precluded !

 

 

 

 

actual -
badly
.. Whatson

notes !

 

 

 

 

right -
handle
.. nothing

left !

 

 


 

distant -
as a soul
.. mate

contract !




uni -
corn
.. butter flies

rain bow !




how -
dare
.. I

tutti frutti !

.

Edited by mysubtleascention
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unexpected -

explanation

... finally detailed

meh lol !

you liked this post like two seconds after i made it!

remember when sab went through a haiku phase? promulgated through competitions and unhealthy fixations.

i swear i was the king of pointless shitty haikus. nobody wants that again.

i never received my prize either.

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shitty valentines -

promulgating

.. thunder

 

swear !

Edited by mysubtleascention

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looking good singles -

trip

.. worth

itch !

 

 

 

 

gallivant -
fervour
.. canoodle

summons !




creator -
sun
.. gaze

my pretties !




sweet -
place
.. the only one

my own !

 

 

 

 

dill -

does

.. buzz

and recharge !

 

 

 

 

temporal -
number
.. address

temples !




CC -
Catch
.. 22

happy returns !

 

 

 

 

corner poet trance -
end
.. forms

precluded !

 

 

 

 

actual -
badly
.. Whatson

notes !

 

 

 

 

shitty valentines -
promulgating
.. thunder

swear !

 

 

 

 

distant -
as a soul
.. mate

contract !

 

 

 

 

right -
handle
.. nothing

left !

 

 

 

 

bleached -

while

.. away

remnant !

 

 

 

 

uni -
corn
.. butter flies

rain bow !

 

 

 

 

fixed -
special
.. horse

of course !

 

 

 

 

honey trapped -
friendly
.. saucer

crazy !

 

 

 

 

how -
dare
.. I

tutti frutti !

 

 

 

 

.

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i dunno... just not feelin it.

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quite up -
to par
.. paradisiac

paraDOx !

 

 

 

 

universal -

love game

.. ladder

 

scale !

 

 

 

 

looking good singles -

trip

.. worth

 

itch !

 

 

 

 

help -
apprentice
.. teacher

plants !

 

 

 

 

gallivant -
fervour
.. canoodle

summons !




creator -
sun
.. gaze

my pretties !




sweet -
place
.. the only one

my own !

 

 

 

 

dill -

does

.. buzz

 

and recharge !

 

 

 

 

temporal -
number
.. address

temples !




CC -
Catch
.. 22

happy returns !

 

 

 

 

corner poet trance -
end
.. forms

precluded !

 

 

 

 

actual -
badly
.. Whatson

notes !

 

 

 

 

shitty valentines -
promulgating
.. thunder

swear !

 

 

 

 

junkie -
passion week
.. quitter

becomes !

 

 

 

 

distant -
as a soul
.. mate

contract !

 

 

 

 

right -
handle
.. nothing

left !

 

 

 

 

bleached -

while

.. away

 

remnant !

 

 

 

 

uni -
corn
.. butter flies

rain bow !

 

 

 

 

fixed -
special
.. horse

of course !

 

 

 

 

honey trapped -
friendly
.. saucer

crazy !

 

 

 

 

oh my acids -
fear
.. base

in formation !

 

 

 

 

how -
dare
.. I

tutti frutti !

 

 

 

 

.

Edited by mysubtleascention

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