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EGA 2010 haiku poetry competition -- 2 tix up for grabs

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Energy, release

No place to release, bad news

Frustration, release?

Can't handle your head?

Don't take that shit around me!

Those problems are yours

Communication

Through the speaker in music

I can't be mad now

Aware, in all forms

Seven eleven, temple!

Worship the new god

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I am made of love

like the mushroom sets off spores

I too spread my source

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The crisis is yours.

I’ll ward off the real danger,

you the perceived.

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Entheogenesis

A haiku competition

Send a ticket my way please

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Taking the fast track,

leads to the path being lost.

Sit and contemplate.

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Poetry bores me

Ill leave it to the artists

.......May as well enter

From a cutting come

new lifeforce? copy of old?

am i just a clone?

Edited by El Barto

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You guys are clever,

hilarious as always.

Seriously,Great.

And here we all are

clapping, counting, typing shit.

all for a ticket.

Simmering, stir, sip.

Now begin closing your eyes,

Get ready to trip.

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Edited by Amazonian

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One thing that I've learnt

It's hard to be a cowboy

When you're a mermaid

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^^^ rofl2.gif

hoodwinked by the truth

enlightened through deception

fiction is the proof

truth is shapeshifting

it might not make sense right now

maybe now it will

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amazonian

that's a good one you did there

unlike this one here

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Natures creation,

bark, spores, mycelium, fruit.

Man's liberation.

Edited by Amazonian
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thanks for the submissions guys, there's a good flow and good quality coming in so keep it up B)

personally, i wanna see more n00bz trying their hand at some haiku... there is nothing to fear except mockery and derision from your cyber-peers :P

nah in all honesty, there;s nothing to it and you can generate something decent in just a few mins.

like instant noodles

such tremendous nourishment

from a simple form

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yer it's easy ey?

some high art right here, dead-set.

don't be a galah.

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I am a Nooby,

I am Amazonian.

made three months of posts !

smile.gif Ha Ha

Edited by Amazonian

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i am a noob too

three thousand posts, dumb ones.

no exceptions here.

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Disintegration,

of the many into one,

Self evolution.

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Disintegration,

of the many into one,

Self evolution.

 

Gets my vote. That's fucking awesome man. Something about it...

Well done! :worship:

Water, crystal clear

Lubrication of the mind

Life giving substance

River stones, smooth, old

Heavy, ancient, shaped with time

Overlooked beauty.

This one will be dumb

Look at me i have poem

Shut up you dumb man

Writers block, of sorts

Used all my good shit early

How should i end this?

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This thread is booming

I like the new NIN (Download Free how to destroy angels)

With hot chicks he speaks

:devil:

Edited by RonnySimulacrum

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nine inch nails are sick

that new track sounds really good

cheers heaps for the link

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The formula so

For self growth is staggering

Pay attention fool

Edited by hutch

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Obliged not to speak

This thought we eat together

Theory created

and

Slam into my brain

What did you expect from me

Fucked us all up now

and

Feeling the knowing

Being torn toward the truth

Unconscious abuse

and

Communicate here

Thoughts and symbols do escape

Then ejaculate

Edit cause I learned the word SYLLABLE....

Edited by hutch

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don't haiku tripping

from the looks of that last post

syllables are hard

:D

those were cool hutch but to win a ticket (or the mystery prize!) it needs to be five syllables, then seven, then five.

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don't haiku tripping

from the looks of that last post

syllables are hard

:D

those were cool hutch but to win a ticket (or the mystery prize!) it needs to be five syllables, then seven, then five.

 

I get it now..syllables are not words...fuck I'm slow..I had to google syllable..It's all coming back to me now(I left school in 1976) :blush:

So thats why I didn't win last year :lol: :lol:

Edited by hutch

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