Yawning Man Posted August 1, 2010 Energy, release No place to release, bad news Frustration, release? Can't handle your head? Don't take that shit around me! Those problems are yours Communication Through the speaker in music I can't be mad now Aware, in all forms Seven eleven, temple! Worship the new god Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Quill Posted August 1, 2010 I am made of love like the mushroom sets off spores I too spread my source 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rahli Posted August 1, 2010 The crisis is yours. I’ll ward off the real danger, you the perceived. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
santiago Posted August 1, 2010 Entheogenesis A haiku competition Send a ticket my way please Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dude Posted August 1, 2010 unbelievable truth replaced by a fiction called reality Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rahli Posted August 2, 2010 Taking the fast track, leads to the path being lost. Sit and contemplate. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
El Barto Posted August 2, 2010 (edited) Poetry bores me Ill leave it to the artists .......May as well enter From a cutting come new lifeforce? copy of old? am i just a clone? Edited August 2, 2010 by El Barto Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amazonian Posted August 3, 2010 (edited) You guys are clever, hilarious as always. Seriously,Great. And here we all are clapping, counting, typing shit. all for a ticket. Simmering, stir, sip. Now begin closing your eyes, Get ready to trip. Edited August 4, 2010 by Amazonian Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Quill Posted August 4, 2010 One thing that I've learnt It's hard to be a cowboy When you're a mermaid Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dude Posted August 4, 2010 ^^^ hoodwinked by the truth enlightened through deception fiction is the proof truth is shapeshifting it might not make sense right now maybe now it will Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ThunderIdeal Posted August 5, 2010 amazonian that's a good one you did there unlike this one here Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amazonian Posted August 7, 2010 (edited) Natures creation, bark, spores, mycelium, fruit. Man's liberation. Edited August 7, 2010 by Amazonian 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
faustus Posted August 7, 2010 thanks for the submissions guys, there's a good flow and good quality coming in so keep it up personally, i wanna see more n00bz trying their hand at some haiku... there is nothing to fear except mockery and derision from your cyber-peers nah in all honesty, there;s nothing to it and you can generate something decent in just a few mins. like instant noodles such tremendous nourishment from a simple form Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ThunderIdeal Posted August 7, 2010 yer it's easy ey? some high art right here, dead-set. don't be a galah. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amazonian Posted August 7, 2010 (edited) I am a Nooby, I am Amazonian. made three months of posts ! Ha Ha Edited August 7, 2010 by Amazonian Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ThunderIdeal Posted August 7, 2010 i am a noob too three thousand posts, dumb ones. no exceptions here. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rahli Posted August 7, 2010 Disintegration, of the many into one, Self evolution. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dude Posted August 8, 2010 Be spontaneous in your life and poetry all flows swimmingly Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Yawning Man Posted August 9, 2010 Disintegration, of the many into one, Self evolution. Gets my vote. That's fucking awesome man. Something about it... Well done! Water, crystal clear Lubrication of the mind Life giving substance River stones, smooth, old Heavy, ancient, shaped with time Overlooked beauty. This one will be dumb Look at me i have poem Shut up you dumb man Writers block, of sorts Used all my good shit early How should i end this? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RonnySimulacrum Posted August 9, 2010 (edited) This thread is booming I like the new NIN (Download Free how to destroy angels) With hot chicks he speaks Edited August 9, 2010 by RonnySimulacrum Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dude Posted August 13, 2010 nine inch nails are sick that new track sounds really good cheers heaps for the link Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 13, 2010 (edited) The formula so For self growth is staggering Pay attention fool Edited August 13, 2010 by hutch Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 13, 2010 (edited) Obliged not to speak This thought we eat together Theory created and Slam into my brain What did you expect from me Fucked us all up now and Feeling the knowing Being torn toward the truth Unconscious abuse and Communicate here Thoughts and symbols do escape Then ejaculate Edit cause I learned the word SYLLABLE.... Edited August 13, 2010 by hutch Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ThunderIdeal Posted August 13, 2010 don't haiku tripping from the looks of that last post syllables are hard :D those were cool hutch but to win a ticket (or the mystery prize!) it needs to be five syllables, then seven, then five. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hutch Posted August 13, 2010 (edited) don't haiku tripping from the looks of that last post syllables are hard :D those were cool hutch but to win a ticket (or the mystery prize!) it needs to be five syllables, then seven, then five. I get it now..syllables are not words...fuck I'm slow..I had to google syllable..It's all coming back to me now(I left school in 1976) So thats why I didn't win last year Edited August 13, 2010 by hutch Share this post Link to post Share on other sites